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Charil
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 6:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sounds good Very Happy

I've been wondering at when would be a good time to bring this question up, and I guess since now we're talking about who's starting and whatever, so here goes.
How is it we'll decide who draws when and how much? I mean, it was mentioned... either in this thread or the very first one that we'd divide it up based on who can do what types of scenes best, but would we just all post what our specialties are, or will someone pipe up and suggest "Okay, I think so-and-so should draw this-and-that", or would we all volunteer like Rei just did? IMHO, volunteering sounds like the best option ATM, but that's open-ended because... well, I should never, ever make final decisions on things ._.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 4:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Um... sorta like a pop system maybe? Volunteer but you can't volunteer again till everyone goes? I suppose we could establish an order and then decide from there.

I vote that each person does a sequence, unless one is particularly long, then they split it with someone else.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 4:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Doing sequences based on the abilities and specialities of the individuals is a good idea. Rei doing the first bit is probably a good idea, because he's the only character who we haven't seen in a comic. I mean, you already know a little about how Rekki speaks, and her body language and stuff through seeing her in FanDanGo, same goes for the other characters from comics.

Speaking of which, I should start a thread on speech modes, body language and oddities.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 7:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Exactly, but we should make sure that everyone does a part before reusing someone else.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 9:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hmmm. So the script begins kind of like:

Shot of the warehouse (use Donut's warehouse pic for this, I think, because it's cool. Scale it to fit in the middle of an otherwise blank, black page with just commentary.) The commentary of the TV continues throughout the scene as the inside of the warehouse is shown, focusing in on the cosy little 'lounge' corner where the Vigilantes are sprawled on sofas, cushions, chairs, the floor.

Dialogue is something like:

"Today's surveys show that there has been no increase in the attacks by the mysterious alien menace, but the assaults have shown little sign of decreasing. The Government advises citizens to stay alert and not wander too far from large cities. Those who remain out in the country may be in darger of attacks from alien forces, or the ever increasing numbers of roaming gangs or self-proclaimed 'Vigilantes'..."
(Vigilantes talk amongst themselves briefly, something like: )
"Hah!"
"Oh yeah, that's us, attacking those foolish people who don't just go to cower under the lawfuls like sheep.."
"Man, this is why I hate network news."
"Guys, Can you be quiet and listen?"
(commentary continues)
"In other news, it seems that children born with strange powers, known commonly as 'Skytouched', are on the increase. The Government denies this is to do with the war, but does warn those who find themselves or their children developing unusual powers should register on their census for the protection of themselves and others. Telltale signs, other than actual displays of power, include areas of hair turning pure white prematurely..."
(Vigilantes again)
"Yeah, Registering will do you a WHOLE lot of good."
"Been there, tried it, got the dogtags..."
"Oh noes! The dangerous skytouched are out to kill us all!"
"You guys have ADD or something? We're trying to keep track on the news here!"

Errr, something like that anyway. Not sure.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 2:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

One more thing I need to know before I start....

How are all the vigilante characters related to one another. Who are friends, who fights, who pretends to despise one another but actually likes one another?

Jinn's impressions would be as follows.

Sky - He'd get a kick out of Sky. I'm sure between the two of them they annoy the snot out of everyone else.

Rekki - He probably hits on her, gets hit, gets huffy but tries again. It depends on the situation. He has the capacity to care about her, but not to show it. ^^; So he'll worry about her and protect her but he won't act like it in everyday situations. they'll be a tad complicated I'm sure...

Redd - Depending on how Redd treats him, Jinn'll either be neutral towards him or act like an obnoxious big brother.

Leon - About the same. I can see these two arguing quite a bit though. They're probably the two that just start yelling at each other before someone shuts them up and things go on.

Cyrus - Jinn doesn't like indifferent or rude attitudes, so they'll probably argue, but it'll be in a more serious "OMGkillJOO!!!" way. ._.; the rest of the group probably tries to keep them seperated and the two of them probably try to avoid one another for the sake of the team.

Post your characters impressions of everyone else's (just vigilantes for now...) and correct me if you think I predicted a relationship wrong... Like, Charil, if you feel Cyrus and Jinn wouldn't hate one another, speak up. ^^;
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 9:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ReiDavidson wrote:
Like, Charil, if you feel Cyrus and Jinn wouldn't hate one another, speak up. ^^;


Actually I've already grown quite fond of that idea Very Happy
Like... well for some more characterization. Cyrus is the kind of guy who'll stand off in the corner and make obnoxious remarks about everything. Which means he would certainly step on a lot of people's toes, metaphorically. I can't imagine him up and approaching anyone go get friendly with-- on the other hand, he's more likely to treat his comrades (excuse the communist jargon ^^; ) as a five-year-old might treat a girl he has a crush on: inexplicably rudely ._.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 11:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aw, he's cute in a asshole-ish way.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 12:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok, I'll go with Rekki here:

Sky: Rekki and Sky share a common unstoppable drive and obsessive nature, so they get on surprisingly well. Sky is a very loyal and honest person despite being borderline insane, and so Rekki trusts her and treats her as a kind of war buddy/comrade. The only problem is that putting the two together could be dangerous without somebody to bring them both down to earth.

Jin: Rekki is secretly somewhat impressed at Jin's perseverence, and enjoys punching him because he can take a punching. She takes his attention as being entirely her due (Rekki has a secret vain streak, as you expect from such a proud character) but considers herself out of Jin's league. She does respect him as a warrior and a friend though.

Redd: Redd is a determined guy, and Rekki has a great deal of respect for him. She thinks he's a cool guy to hang with, and a good ally in battle. Maybe she wishes he'd show her attention in a more than simply friendly way... Together they make a good fighting duo because they both act on instinct.

Leon: Leon is reckless and hot tempered. In other words, he and Rekki have a fair bit in common. Problem is that this tends to cause them to clash. Rekki views Leon as being like a sibling, she cares for his safety, but can't help getting into arguments with him if they're stuck in a room together because they both like to do things their own way.

Cyrus: Rekki is always in conflict about Cyrus. At times she thinks he's an admirable man for his ability to think things through and consider the risks, as well as his sarcastic wit, but if he says anything directed at her, she'll probably go into 'angry teen' mode and want to rebel against him, and will answer back or act contrary to everything he would want her to do.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 7:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

So so far Cyrus is a bit of a blacksheep, Jinn is thought of as maybe a bit goofy, but well-liked, Cyrus and Jinn, despite being allies, are rivals, Redd is a little brother figure, Rekki comes off like she's a bit of a leader, Sky is also considered goofy but well-liked, and Leon probably gets into rows with everyone, but never gets hard feelings set on him.

Good dynamics, who else has input?
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The vigilantes probably don't have an official leader, and it's unlikely Rekki would consider herself to BE the leader, but she may well come across seeming like one. Even though she isn't a knight in this reality, she still has the kind of proud, noble warrior bearing you might associate with one. She's become a little more cynical, and is less stiff about upholding the laws in the Hypernova universe, but she still has that feeling about her, like she's meant to be a knight, but is just in the wrong time and place.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 2:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I kinda got that impression too.

Okay, last last question. ._. How long has everyone known everyone else for?

Like who were the original vigilantes?

Who are the oldest friends?

Who are the newest members?
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 3:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, I don't know about the others, but Rekki has probably been a vigilante for about a year and a half. She joined the Lawfuls at fifteen, served for a year and a half, becoming increasingly cynical and disenchanted with the system, then suddenly went AWOL and was found by a vigilante group as she wandered around looking lost and bashing aliens to death with a telephone pole because her lazer gun was out of batteries.
She's since dyed her hair red and taken to using a revolver as a die hard vigilante.
Rekki won't be the very longest serving member, but from the relative ages of the group, she probably isn't the newest.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 4:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I wanna say Sky and Jinn are the founders. Not the leaders because both would rather not have the responsibility, but the originals. I also wanna say they've known each other longer than anyone else.

I'd say the order is

1. Jinn and Sky
2. Rekki
3. Cyrus
4. Redd
5. Leon

You think, maybe? Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 5:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ReiDavidson wrote:
I wanna say Sky and Jinn are the founders. Not the leaders because both would rather not have the responsibility, but the originals. I also wanna say they've known each other longer than anyone else.

I'd say the order is

1. Jinn and Sky
2. Rekki
3. Cyrus
4. Redd
5. Leon

You think, maybe? Smile


thats pretty much in the order that each artist joined. :3



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